On Friday we had a celebration at school. We got to play some games. We played statues. We played pass the parcel too. It was noisy too. There was colourful dresses. The children had party hats too. I liked the noise.
"I like writing at school. I am proud of all the words I used in my story from my brainstorm. Next time I could try to write more describing words to make my story interesting."
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You can write lots of words in your brainstorm, well done! Remember to use these words in your story. I like how you used your senses to help with your writing.
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